[ BRC nods in approval. You're doing very well, Gina! ]
... But then the clouds began to darken, and lightning pierced the sky. A storm began to brew, and it was far more intense than any they had braved before. It caused the waves to hit hard and fast - and as the ship was tossed about, one of the Cookies onboard fell over. It was likely he'd drown beneath the harsh seas...
... But the little gem mermaid could not stand to see him suffer. So, forgoing all she'd been told, she whisked him away to shore, vowing to save his life at all costs.
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... But then the clouds began to darken, and lightning pierced the sky. A storm began to brew, and it was far more intense than any they had braved before. It caused the waves to hit hard and fast - and as the ship was tossed about, one of the Cookies onboard fell over. It was likely he'd drown beneath the harsh seas...
... But the little gem mermaid could not stand to see him suffer. So, forgoing all she'd been told, she whisked him away to shore, vowing to save his life at all costs.