[Even if Yuma had requested doing away with all the respectful pleasantries, it wasn't likely to have had any effect.]
Yuma Ilvern? Odd name for a dragon.
[He wasn't used to such creatures having proper names in such a format.]
Not that I'm complaining. [It just wasn't the phenomenal, striking, awe-inspiring moniker he'd anticipated.] There's no title to go with it? How many lands have you crushed under your talons?
[... Kaiba was certainly weird, and a little to interested in destructive strength. The plans he had in mind likely wouldn't be in keeping with Yuma's]
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Yuma Ilvern? Odd name for a dragon.
[He wasn't used to such creatures having proper names in such a format.]
Not that I'm complaining. [It just wasn't the phenomenal, striking, awe-inspiring moniker he'd anticipated.] There's no title to go with it? How many lands have you crushed under your talons?
[... Kaiba was certainly weird, and a little to interested in destructive strength. The plans he had in mind likely wouldn't be in keeping with Yuma's]